Poem of the Month: The End of Crisis

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The End of Crisis by Cindy Juyoung OK

 

When you leap over the deer carcasses

that line every garden, you will marvel

at their tidiness, at how bloodless a death

by drought can be. When I crawl through

the highway pieces shattered by heat,

I will admire the clean slits as I kick

aside crumbles of broken stone with little

blistering. When you thread between

the overtaken shores and bodies of elders,

frozen, when I follow the fallen saplings’

directions toward the horizon where

colorless sky and earth meet, we will

remember rippling at the birthday parties

for corporations and framing the ash

of beloved photos burnt in wildfire. When

we think of crossing the river to each

other, you from the gorge of the landslide

to me at the crest of the typhoon, it is then

we will find ourselves in a dead imaginary,

in some fictive past where the  you exists,

where I   is not a myth we use to keep

surviving at the cost of bird and glacier,

home and tenderness. Having ruined

the future of  becoming fossils, finally

we will know that it is for nothing we

die, never in place of drowned sea

turtles or swarming locusts, or to foil

cancerous sand and mold, not even for

the dance of subway floods or the graceless

eclipse of all our promises and planets.

 

Bringing focus upon the inconvenient environmental truths that haunt the future of our planet, Cindy draws the audience in with macabre descriptions of an Earth in ruin. What I love is how the speaker does not present this as merely a problem for the young caused by the elderly (as is such an easy assumption to fall into in this modern age) but they unite young and old in lines 8-10 through the metaphor of trees. This personification of the trees invites the audience to identify with the other organisms that inhabit this planet that are not human. This expertly highlights that global warming is a problem for every living thing on the planet. The poem unnerves the audience as the depiction of the destroyed planet is both tragically horrifying and descriptively beautiful in its telling. There is a fascinating post-human element to this poem from lines 18-23, which describes the self in the past tense; not only are humans extinct but the idea of the self is presented as a myth that fuels our species’ sense of individuality at the cost of the planet. The most harrowing line is when the speaker declares ‘finally we will know that it is for nothing we die.’

Check out more of Cindy Juyoung OK here: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poets/cindy-juyoung-ok

Charlie Pidcock is a music artist from the midlands and also co-hosts "I Hate Poetry."

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